Music! Poem by Katie Swan

Music!

Rating: 5.0


Playing music is such fun,
Espcialy when your in the sun!
Bruce and the E-street band,
Really make a lovely sound,
Clasical, Rap, Rock 'n' Roll,
Dancing around the firemans pole,
Music really is the best,
Better than all the rest!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 29 August 2005

Very nice Katie. You have some nice poetry here for someone of such a young age. Keep up the writing and we can expect many great things. Sincerely, Mary

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Uriah Hamilton 29 August 2005

Hey Katie, I'm with you about digging the music, keeping writing the poetry also!

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Kathleen Paul-Flanagan 31 August 2005

Bruce and The E-Street band...You had me smiling again. Used to love Bruce when I was a kid. You've got a few typos but no big deal. Just run a spell check before you post. :)

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Kelly Allen Vinal 30 August 2005

Another great poem, Katie! And you love great music!

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Shelia Williams 30 August 2005

I can really relate to this one. I am a music lover myself

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sheila knowles 30 August 2005

Yay Katie...I'm soooooo proud of you :))

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Herbert Nehrlich1 29 August 2005

I agree with Mary and Uriah but must add that the talent lurking behind that innocent face needs to be complemented by attention to (spelling) detail. I liked the ambience of the poem. And I like music. H

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