Musical You Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

Musical You

Rating: 5.0


Your the song I want to sing
Even if the notes in you are unreachable
Still your musical words are attracting
With emotions that is inexplicable

Can you please grant what I've requested
Let me sing the melody you're covering
Though I might mess up and make it tainted
I'll try my best coz' it's worth trying

But if my voice can't race it up
I'll lift it high with my guitar
With the struming rythm it'll reach the top
For your melody it'll soar every star

Or I can play your music with my piano
You'll hear harmonies with flawless keys
Just like the one's you hear on the radio
It'll move you away from your axis

I’ll use everything possible
To play you with every sound
My piano or my guitar
It’ll do to make you astound

I'll play you with every tone
Even with the highest peak of note
But it'll be nicer if I'm not alone
Us with just one voice, that is my quote

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danzen D. 28 June 2009

Nice rhyme..kinda playful in tone, heh heh. Keep writing!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 June 2009

ammmmmazing! fine flow! 10+

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Julia Pascual 14 June 2009

nice poem ena! ! i wish someone would dicate that to me..=)

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Nashy Lamen 10 June 2009

NICE ONE ENA! ! ! ! ... Good rhyming and rhythm, .. Keep it up... god bless, , .

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