Mute Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Mute

Rating: 4.8


Life is a million
unspoken words.
The silent music
of the tongue,
stored deep
in the soul,
revealed through through the eyes
of the living and dead.
Hotwired in the mind
but locked in one head.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 29 May 2013

A fantastic poem, with a slight darkness to it.

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Sally P. P. 26 May 2020

Hi, Dave, thanks for your encouragement, always. x

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Joseph Anderson 20 April 2013

A powerful message with a brevity of words-I like it - great job

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Alexander Coppedge 31 March 2013

Well spoken great poetic delieverance polish it up remove doubled through and make the end ones head

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Sally P. P. 26 May 2020

I don’t quite understand what you mean, but... thanks for your interest.Keep in touch.

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Valerie Dohren 26 March 2013

Short and succinct, but powerful and thought-provoking. Like it Sally.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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