My Baby Poem by James Elston

My Baby



Far more beautiful then words can describe
Empty is how I feel without you by my side
Loving you is all I ever want to do
I give you my heart and soul
Couragously I wait
Anticipating when once again you will be by my side

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Kim Barney 11 August 2015

Very nice. In line one, however, you meant THAN instead of THEN.

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James Elston

James Elston

Providence, Rhode Island
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