My Best Freinds Poem by Rohan Bendre

My Best Freinds



here they came
sucess is their fame
here comes my master
for failure he is stranger
doesn.t matter day is sunny
he will make you laugh he is that funny
second freind is simple
he is as cool as apple
other friends are concentrateive on triple
together they are motivator because they are cool
encouragement in them are in full
all i want tosay
simple as silent tool
one thing i don, t need to mention
they are full of affection

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 24 August 2009

Too many mistakes to be taken seriously. You even had an error in the title. More care needed, if you are going to submit work in English. Regards, Ian

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