My Best Friend Poem by Callie Shaw

My Best Friend

Rating: 5.0


Remember all the times laughing together,
sharing secrets and hanging out,
We always said friends forever,
and new what each other was all about,

We had fun all the time,
the days were bliss,
you were my partner in crime,
those are the days I miss,

The days that you wiped away my tears,
told me he wasnt good enough,
We shared each others fears,
stood by each others sides when times grew ruff,

I memorized everything about you friend,
now you are gone,
We said till the end,
Now I am alone,

You are still my best friend,
I am still here,
remember I have till the end,
Soon I will be near

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hector Gonzales 01 December 2009

wow! very nice! I hope you see your friend again.

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Jessica Lowe 05 December 2009

Wow, Callie.. This is really good hun... It's soo sad =(... There are few gramatical errors in it but all in all... this was a brillient poem <3

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Elizabeth Pirchmoser 20 December 2009

That was really sad. Hits home. Thanks for sharing that with us [=

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C. P. Sharma 21 March 2010

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's wonderful. CP

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Jay Akarim 14 January 2010

this is a really good poem i can relate to everything you wrote very good job! : D

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 04 January 2010

You know very well how to weave emotions... It was a 'WoW! ! ' one :)

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! ? LoVe DeViL ?! HD 30 December 2009

good writing..i'm impress..waiting for more from u.. :)

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Shekhar Joshi 26 December 2009

That was nice Not totally bowled over but yeah i liked it For me It hits home with the fact that many can really identify with it Nice work Have 2-3 typos tho Anyways u rock \m/

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