My Biggest Mistake Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

My Biggest Mistake



Your stunning beauty made me so blind
I couldn't see you were not my kind!
I didn't care what people opined
Without thinking I gave you my mind!
Now who will give me where shall I find
The golden days which are left behind?
Now I wonder if I could rewind
My life to get back those days that shined!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samantha Robinson 25 September 2012

Nicely done. Large history in a small poem. Samantha

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Vipins Puthooran 26 September 2012

there's time for e'erything/ a good-poem!

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Alufa Oke Joshua 26 September 2012

ahead of you shining days are more than you ever imagine. Really thoughtful of you. Keep it coming. Well done

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Mark Dillon 25 September 2012

very well written, emotional, i feel the loss

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Words' Knight 25 September 2012

really really I love this sonnet so much, and I love your purifying heart and your style.thank you for inviting me to read your sparkling poems.

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 September 2012

no worry..sometimes mistakes happen..narrated well

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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