My Blood Flows As My Love Shows Poem by Baden Ronie

My Blood Flows As My Love Shows

Rating: 5.0


bright red,
shining bright,
in this morning light,
my blood flows,
seeps away,
as my life fades,
my breathing slows,
my heart falters,
my thoughts turn to you,
as buetiful as an angel,
as warm as flame,
i see your eyes,
watching me,
i smile,
as the blood flows,
leaves my body,
never to return,
i mouth the words,
and scream them in my soul,
'i love you'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gi Galen 30 November 2008

”Bright beauty», it is dramatic and it is melodious …

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C.H. Seow 30 November 2008

gosh...i've been writing poems like that those days...mine sounded a lil' bit morbid at times but i can really feel the warmth in this poem..another good one bro!

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