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My Box

I Made a box
with lids and locks
big enough for me to sit in
i took the chance
climed in and bottled the lid above me
i made the walls of my box so they could move closer and closer towards me
my neck binding into my body
i felt like clothes in a sutcase
look what i have made for my self
look what i have become
look at the box
though you won't see me
like a walnut in it's shell!

Submitted: Saturday, May 22, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, May 25, 2010


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  • majid Alsaady (5/24/2010 12:14:00 PM)

    very cute and canny, but deep and clear.i like it much.Putting oneself into problems without knowing how to get out. Getting into prison by one's will.Man usually practise thar

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  • majid Alsaady (5/24/2010 12:09:00 PM)

    very cute and canny, but deep and clear.i like it much

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