My Broken Wings Poem by danyelle tedrow

My Broken Wings

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my wings where broken thay where turning
in to dust
then you came and lefted them up
i cry and cry
then you came and wiped away my tears
i bleed and bleed
and you came and bandage me up
i thought and thought
of commiting suicide
and then you came and scared the thought away
i sleep, t and sleep, t
and never wanted to wake up
and then you came in to my life and made me
rise like sun shine
thank you thank you
my very best friend i felt empty
but now i fill whole


this poem is for a friend who is given up and i don, t want her to and i hope see reads this she means the world to me love ya girl

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bloodied Heart 21 October 2011

I know what your friend was going through so I fully understand this peom. I am glade you made this, the darkness seems to hang on a little while longer but now I can understand it more. I will do my best to make more poems... Thnx fer the poem! hope to read more~!

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Crimson Love 21 October 2011

Beautiful poem, your friend is lucky to be able to call you friend, truly amazing poem! :)

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hey danyelle i read this poem. i have been in the dark 4 a while and stiull am. i can see the light little by little but i am still workin my way theough it with friends by my side and a wonderful bf as well as others who axtually love and care about me. as i read this poem it really did bring tears to my eyes. this poem has so much emotion,4 otherrs may not undeerstand it or may think its simple and dumb but until you go through what i am and many others go through as well as seriously hit rock bottom no one on earth will understand it to the poit they would tear up like did. thank you so unbelievaby much. you really did help e and pyush me not to give up.

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