Vanessa Hernandez

Rookie (06-20-1994 / Bejing)

My Brother.....


My Brother is so annoying
My Brother is so sad
My Brother drives me crazy
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  • Rookie Aoife Bridges (2/14/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    My brother is 2 it is his birthday soon and I want to tell him how much i love him


    I love you Louie xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kayla Ware (11/5/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    this is exactly how i feel towards my brother but i know that i don't want to loss him (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aynton Clemmons (7/1/2012 2:25:00 PM)

    My brother is 6 years older then me and i love with with everything. I know he hates me somtime and i hate him somtimes but i wouldnt no what i would do with out my brother. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Natasha Reay (2/18/2010 4:10:00 AM)

    My brother is two years older than I, my brother is my best friend, my brother is my hero. My brother has a huge heart that I hope to someday somehow make mine resemble, he calls me 'the awesome sister' my brother is the omly person I have actually thought about strangling, my brother is the only person that I can stay mad at for more than a few minutes. My brother is my hero. My brother is my protector.

    if I had an ounce of poetic ability more those would be the words I would type. My brother is literally crazy. he is the softest person you can know yet the strongest ever. My brother is my hero! I love my lumpy! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jarrod Wakefield (11/4/2009 11:18:00 PM)

    when i read this it describes exactly how i feel about and want to do to my brother a really good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bethany Buhl (8/13/2008)

    They might have there bad moments, but then again they have there good moments to. I remember hanging out with my brother when I was young and now I can't even get him to talk to me for a minute. I know that one day his gonna leave cause he's making bad choices and his gonna end up dead or in jail either way i'm not gonna see him anyways which isn't that different than now I guess. I hope he knows that I still love him even through I don't show him that I do and I think he hates me, but I wouldn't know cause he never talks to me anymore and that makes me a little sad sometimes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (8/9/2008 7:42:00 PM)

    This was a wonderful structure and message poem delivered with effectiveness and feeling. There was so much feeling expressed that the ending wass not a surprise.
    Wonderful.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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