Charles Hice

Rookie (May 13 2004 / Heaven)

My Brother - Poem by Charles Hice

My Brother
as you are
I am half-dead
Blind in one eye I can`t see out of the other
I must not hate my brother
but how can i love you
as you are
beating me on my face
leaving no trace of love
as you erase me
as you are
smiling death heads grin
enjoying your power
life over life
life over death
leather gloves tatooeing
enjoying.......these words
should never be linked to fighting
what a monster

Comments about My Brother by Charles Hice

  • Christy Tanksley (6/22/2006 6:26:00 PM)

    hey this is christy i am a poet on here and i just wanted to tell you that i had the same experience like the one you are facing and i thought that way of my brother but then that week my brother died so i am not saying that that is going to happen but yeah i know what you are facing and i absolutley love you poem cause i expresses everything that you feel about your brother (Report) Reply

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  • Chase Goody (6/22/2006 5:14:00 PM)

    I know exactly how that feels. My brother has done that to me and its not a great feeling. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 22, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, August 9, 2010

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