My Castle Poem by Vipin Trisal

My Castle

Rating: 5.0


No one can conquer me with power, anger and terror,
As my heart is my castle and it is mine forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jemarie Ragudo 14 November 2007

The heart may not be conquered by power, anger or terror, but it can be conquered by LOVE! The only difference is that, in the first three, you are forced. Whereas, with love, you willingly have yourself conquered. And what a beautiful surrender it will be! You're a very promising poet. Write more.

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Malini Kadir 13 October 2007

Don't be too sure... Pride goes before a fall That is all i say!

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