Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

Rookie (3/3/1990 / Al Iskandarī yah)

My Circus Show


you are welcome to my world, the circus of my life
show me what it seems to be like them
they always come and they always all will go
no one can stay because we are placed in hell

the path I took is too long
my feet won't carry me all my life
we all doubt that the scissors can't cut
what remains from our lives

they kill only in their mind, alone with their own fate
it comes true as they fade into my world
when you look long enough into the ocean abyss
the abyss also looks enough into your will

I never played chess with anyone
whom I once believed I can beat
sixty four squares aren't enough
for my moves of castling then beat

it's my circus show
that proclaims in me
I tell you how it goes
to take off and flee

Submitted: Sunday, October 11, 2009
Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011

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  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (7/9/2010 8:38:00 AM)

    We all know that the life is like the circus...
    But you described your circus in a good way and added your special touch.
    Well penned! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (10/16/2009 2:50:00 AM)

    you are a poet be ma3nal kalema! ! ! not like us we a re playing...but you are really a poet your words can tell that your poetic expressions are wonderful! ! ! i'm very proud of you....spread your self! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie true Little angel ...! ! ! (10/12/2009 5:58:00 PM)

    yeah. that's true... nicely written Mohammed.. thanks for sharing such cool poetry... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (10/12/2009 9:19:00 AM)

    sweetness! ! :) I like the way you write! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points The Lost.. (10/12/2009 9:02:00 AM)

    it's a very nice poem, i like it..keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (10/12/2009 7:41:00 AM)

    It is a nice piece for a thought. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/12/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    your poem emits fresh poetic air nice to smell all through (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Abdul Athani (10/12/2009 12:45:00 AM)

    its a nice and a sweet poem on circus type of life 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,595 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2009 7:05:00 PM)

    it's my circus show
    that proclaims in me
    I tell you how it goes
    to take off and flee.....life is great circus in which we all have play oyr part and leave this worldat destined time.. this is how it goes onwith sad or happy part.. well done and keep it up....10

    read mine.....no to sorrow... cuckoo... great circus....visiting hell (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (10/11/2009 2:25:00 PM)

    Well penned, Mohammed, very deep in essence, as you can see, our lives sometimes become a real circus, one way or another, and we all are clowns with smiling face without the audience realizing or noticing our broken hearts...great work, you got my vote 10+, Love and Peace, brother (Report) Reply

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