My Concern Poem by rhona fabi

My Concern

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Did you ever ask
yourself why?
I'm always in the act
of taking care of you.

Did you ever feel it
there inside?
That I'm but concern with
no other than you.

Whenever you tell me that
you feel hurt,
you maybe not knowing it
but I wish you to be fine.

I can't help
but to wory everytime.
Oh just believe
I'm telling no lie.

Can't I soo you feeling hurt.
More really to see you in wosrt.
I wanna make you feel my concern first
from the time you came
upto the time of letting go.

I want you to feel my care
to make you see
beside you I'm there.
'Cause my heart
you're always here.

Copyright © by Ronalyn 'Rhona' T. Fabi
(An original poem written on the 11th day of October 2007. This poem is dedicate to JB C. Rivera.)

(This literary piece is govern with the rights of the author. Anyone who wants to use this poem should first ask the author or contact at reiyuucy_26@yahoo.com)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 September 2009

you have a good one here!

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Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

a nice theme and well aimed...narrated well... just can't comprehend with words like ' soo ' and ' wosrt ' or maybe a suggestion to re phrase your stanza = I don't want to see you feeling hurt Much more to see you worse

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