My Daily Prayer Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

My Daily Prayer

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Let the rain pour
Let the thunder roar
Let the ground shake
Let the heart break
Into countless pieces

Let the odds rise
Let the sunset
Let the night stay
Let the life pale
Into colorless color

Let the rocks cut
Let the road hurt
Let the blood spill
Let the path desert
Into helpless sand

Let my heart break
Let my life pale
Let my path desert
But, let me not desert
Those ageless values

That my heart trusts
That my life learned
That my path follows
So let me follow them
Even into ageless age

Its my daily prayer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 14 April 2009

Quite morale...good poem10

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Catrina Heart 14 April 2009

let me not desert Those ageless values --------- A vivid prayer that everyone must read on.................meaningful poem!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 April 2009

Let my heart break Let my life pale Let my path desert But, let me not desert Those ageless values................So great prayer in so simple language..........Good Write......

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Joseph Poewhit 14 April 2009

Reads like an active life.

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Antonio Liao 03 March 2010

Wow......my great appreciation and sincere aculeate to the poet....beautifully crafted the great power of Prayer in out midst...thank you and God bless.... a 10 +++++

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Janell Cressman 19 April 2009

stunning, brilliant, inspirational, amazing, phenomenal, fabulous! ! ! !

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Eyan Desir 16 April 2009

great flow good write

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 April 2009

Kudos to you my young friend. Hats off to your ideals. Wonderful composition

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Louis Rams 14 April 2009

a beautiful write. a ten

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