Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 80 Points (June 5th / Palghat- Kerala- India)

My Dear Red Rose! - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Your grace vibrancy your hues
The fragrance of your honey drips
Inviting lure your petal lips!
I love you dear you hear red rose?
How could I dislike you leave forlorn?
For those thorns under your leaves alone!


Comments about My Dear Red Rose! by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Rookie - 0 Points Briana Doni (1/6/2010 3:31:00 PM)

    wow!
    this poem is so romantic and just makes me fill up with happiness.
    something about it. just makes me all warm and happy! i love it.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Winnie Angel (12/31/2009 1:27:00 AM)

    Red roses are queen of flowers and queen of our hearts tooo! ..Enchante..Winnie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie bye bye... bye bye (12/22/2009 8:05:00 AM)

    When I read your poem I take it as you are a bit sarcastic? But no other comments refer to that, so I guess I may misunderstand you.

    You are so aware of this 'beauty dilemma': You can´t get a rose if you don´t accept the thorns. But - if the rose would leave you, you wouldn´t miss the thorns.

    A very romantic AND realistic poem - at the same time!
    Amazing paradox! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nizamettin Esen Haymanali (12/20/2009 11:51:00 AM)

    Inspirational, intense and excellent verses very well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Meggie Gultiano (12/19/2009 8:58:00 PM)

    Lovely lines..this is beautiful, Kesav (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandhya S N (12/13/2009 11:24:00 PM)

    beautiful poem
    regards
    sandhya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie CRACK HEAD (12/13/2009 8:57:00 PM)

    wow. this poem is beautiful... its sweet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lucille Martin (12/12/2009 12:43:00 AM)

    Wow, this poem is short, yet so beautiful. I love the closing. By the way, thanks for leaving me a comment earlier. : -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (12/11/2009 1:43:00 AM)

    Hahaha! Romantic, yet with that funny ending... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (12/10/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    simple and wonderful..thorn comes as a package with this exquisite beauty..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (12/10/2009 8:09:00 PM)

    short yet cleverly structured...remarkable closing! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie , aryaindia (12/10/2009 7:31:00 PM)

    You play with the words leaves that leaves the reader quizzical and puzzled for to unwittingly leave forlorn one who seemingly captures the mind and heart is the greatest sad tale of the human heart. Well written - arya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Ramin Chaman (12/10/2009 3:21:00 AM)

    Dear Kesav

    Thanks for your nice comment.and you believe me that you have a sincere heart too.

    but about your nice poem...your writes always are full of youthful
    also your words are poetic..
    and i love you for that a heart of red rose...

    Ramin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mandara Pookal (12/9/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    When colours beautify an individual's personality, the aura and mystic of the perfumed mind plays havoc on the romantic physiology that raves and rants for approval and attention. Perhaps a tandem struck and a response withheld but all the same the feeling leaves one more beautiful to the eyes, mind and heart of the other. Your acceptance of all that one is made up of spells your generosity. As an onlooker, I envy your stance. mandara (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 554 Points Seema Chowdhury (12/9/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    For those thorns under your leaves alone....
    very nice and meaningful closing.
    thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ejaz Khan (12/9/2009 3:52:00 AM)

    Your writes always succeed presenting the thoughts in an attractive manner, your words flow beautifully and create lovely poems! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (12/9/2009 1:04:00 AM)

    Short but beautifully written
    Showered with rich words.
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks for sharing with me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points g black black (12/8/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    thast a shoet poem and i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (12/8/2009 8:05:00 AM)

    the thorns are not visible because we are so captivated with the beauty and the fragrance of a rose or a loved one. a true lover accepts both with grace, a very mature message, Kesav. you have used the metaphor of rose brilliantly.


    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr.Wardha Jawdat (12/8/2009 6:22:00 AM)

    beautiful......rich velvety words... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 26, 2011


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