My Defenses, My Wall Poem by Blood Rose

My Defenses, My Wall

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You came and I had my wall
I fought you and you broke my wall.
You wanted to win my heart
The greatest prize you could earn from me
I gave this prize away once
And it was crushed.
But never again I vowed
After the crushed prize.
And so you protected me,
Helped me, gave me council,
Let me cry on you,
And gave me the great gifts.
You gave me comfort for the pain I felt,
You gave me the benefit of the doubt
You gave me the greatest gift that could ever be given
Your heart, and so I gave mine to you.
The love we had is true, and the story true as well.
Never let your love go for you may regret it.

Friday, March 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 25 April 2015

Wonderful poem about a great love and your openness to love even after having been hurt in the past. Great advice also: Never let your love go for you may regret it. A poem giving hope to others who may be afraid of loving after a bad experience. Sincere, genuine, message in these lines, I like this poem very much. Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn

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