Eyan Desir

Rookie - 15 Points (caribbean)

.. My Definition Of Beauty - Poem by Eyan Desir

Beauty are the roses
Mixed with beauty within
Not just a pretty face
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Comments about .. My Definition Of Beauty by Eyan Desir

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anna Glockling (11/10/2015 10:25:00 PM)

    Am I allowed to use this as a piece in a Speech and Debate competition? I will be trying to share the difference between worldy and Godly beauty and this fits perfectly in it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 50,921 Points Chinedu Dike (12/29/2014 5:04:00 AM)

    A THING OF BEAUTY IS A JOY FOR EVER - John Keats. A beautiful poem, well articulated and penned with insight. Indeed True Beauty lives very deep inside. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Shannon Hogan (3/14/2010 12:03:00 AM)

    utterly beautiful so well put (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pradnya P (1/4/2010 10:35:00 AM)


    This poem is beautifullllllllllllllllllllllllllll
    and u write not only well but very beautifullyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy welllllllllllllllll :)
    its really nice and creative (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brandy Vogeding (12/1/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Real beauty is not appearances. Real beauty is sharing love, and learning, and wonder. Real beauty is healing those who are hurting.

    Good job, from a wonderful poet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Karen Touzalin (11/28/2009 6:27:00 PM)

    Is beauty love, is love beauty? . They both evoke strong emotions, well said, Eyan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (11/25/2009 5:04:00 PM)

    Beauty is soul deep. A fine, expressive defination.

    Warm wishes,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Becky Laprarie (11/21/2009 2:36:00 AM)

    I truly found this poem to be passionate-a sunny day for you when you wrote this-perhaps-a feeling of there is hope in love and passion-beauty does come from deep within and it can be seen in the eyes-blessings and thanks for sharing- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (11/17/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    'Beauty are the flowers
    Blessed with faithfulness
    Honesty stains it's plate
    Its kindness fills lakes
    Its love cannot break'...

    nice passage...here the metaphor and the message lie down beautifully embraced...good work...10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 947 Points Ency Bearis (11/10/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    well defined...and a simile of thoughts presented well...remarkable....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kutlwano Sonji Nkwe (10/13/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    there is nothing confused than beauty
    to many dying in confusion is now a duty
    it is time to leave them jobless
    this is the best i have to confess (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nalini Hebbar (10/7/2009 8:38:00 PM)

    liked this one a lot...inner beauty counts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (10/3/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    Very beautiful reflections............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 159 Points Maia Padua (7/18/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    very wonderful, my friend..
    I'm amazed by your new ideas...sweet and romantic
    fine-flowing and striking to the heart..
    you're growing more and more poetic and creative

    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,412 Points Indira Renganathan (7/5/2009 11:44:00 PM)

    A beautiful definition of beauty....beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/27/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    Beautifully expressed the beauty.
    Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Guess who's back Angel Wade (6/13/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    this is a very beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kristina B; Williams (6/11/2009 7:33:00 PM)

    that is beautiful.im actually speechless....and thats unusal 4 me bcuz im all italian...lol i gave it and you a 10.ive read just 2 of your poems in like the past 4 hours, and im a fan.(no not one of the crazy 1s) lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amatullah Areeba Ashfaq (6/10/2009 3:04:00 AM)

    this was amazing. you write in such a captivative manner. I especially love the line 'but true beauty lives very deep inside' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Darkest Of The Happyest (5/13/2009 12:51:00 PM)

    wow that i so cool i luv it (Report) Reply

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