Eyan Desir

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.. My Definition Of Beauty - Poem by Eyan Desir

Beauty are the roses
Mixed with beauty within
Not just a pretty face
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Comments about .. My Definition Of Beauty by Eyan Desir

  • Gregory Vest (1/24/2016 12:39:00 AM)

    Beauty not of the appearance, but of noble substance. (Report) Reply

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  • Anna Glockling (11/10/2015 10:25:00 PM)

    Am I allowed to use this as a piece in a Speech and Debate competition? I will be trying to share the difference between worldy and Godly beauty and this fits perfectly in it. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (12/29/2014 5:04:00 AM)

    A THING OF BEAUTY IS A JOY FOR EVER - John Keats. A beautiful poem, well articulated and penned with insight. Indeed True Beauty lives very deep inside. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Shannon Hogan (3/14/2010 12:03:00 AM)

    utterly beautiful so well put (Report) Reply

  • Pradnya P (1/4/2010 10:35:00 AM)

    Hi,

    This poem is beautifullllllllllllllllllllllllllll
    and u write not only well but very beautifullyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy welllllllllllllllll :)
    its really nice and creative (Report) Reply

  • Brandy Vogeding (12/1/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Real beauty is not appearances. Real beauty is sharing love, and learning, and wonder. Real beauty is healing those who are hurting.

    Good job, from a wonderful poet. (Report) Reply

  • Karen Touzalin (11/28/2009 6:27:00 PM)

    Is beauty love, is love beauty? . They both evoke strong emotions, well said, Eyan (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (11/25/2009 5:04:00 PM)

    Beauty is soul deep. A fine, expressive defination.

    Warm wishes,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Becky Laprarie (11/21/2009 2:36:00 AM)

    I truly found this poem to be passionate-a sunny day for you when you wrote this-perhaps-a feeling of there is hope in love and passion-beauty does come from deep within and it can be seen in the eyes-blessings and thanks for sharing- (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (11/17/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    'Beauty are the flowers
    Blessed with faithfulness
    Honesty stains it's plate
    Its kindness fills lakes
    Its love cannot break'...

    nice passage...here the metaphor and the message lie down beautifully embraced...good work...10 (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (11/10/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    well defined...and a simile of thoughts presented well...remarkable....10 (Report) Reply

  • Kutlwano Sonji Nkwe (10/13/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    there is nothing confused than beauty
    to many dying in confusion is now a duty
    it is time to leave them jobless
    this is the best i have to confess (Report) Reply

  • Nalini Hebbar (10/7/2009 8:38:00 PM)

    liked this one a lot...inner beauty counts (Report) Reply

  • rago rago (10/3/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    Very beautiful reflections............. (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua Maia Padua (7/18/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    very wonderful, my friend..
    I'm amazed by your new ideas...sweet and romantic
    fine-flowing and striking to the heart..
    you're growing more and more poetic and creative
    10+++

    lovelots,
    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan Indira Renganathan (7/5/2009 11:44:00 PM)

    A beautiful definition of beauty....beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq Ashraful Musaddeq (6/27/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    Beautifully expressed the beauty.
    Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Guess who's back Angel Wade (6/13/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    this is a very beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Kristina B; Williams (6/11/2009 7:33:00 PM)

    that is beautiful.im actually speechless....and thats unusal 4 me bcuz im all italian...lol i gave it and you a 10.ive read just 2 of your poems in like the past 4 hours, and im a fan.(no not one of the crazy 1s) lol (Report) Reply

  • Amatullah Areeba Ashfaq (6/10/2009 3:04:00 AM)

    this was amazing. you write in such a captivative manner. I especially love the line 'but true beauty lives very deep inside' (Report) Reply










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