Treasure Island

Eyan Desir

(caribbean)

.. My Definition Of Beauty


Beauty are the roses
Mixed with beauty within
Not just a pretty face
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  • Pradnya P (1/4/2010 10:35:00 AM)

    Hi,

    This poem is beautifullllllllllllllllllllllllllll
    and u write not only well but very beautifullyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy welllllllllllllllll :)
    its really nice and creative (Report) Reply

  • Brandy Vogeding (12/1/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Real beauty is not appearances. Real beauty is sharing love, and learning, and wonder. Real beauty is healing those who are hurting.

    Good job, from a wonderful poet. (Report) Reply

  • Becky Laprarie (11/21/2009 2:36:00 AM)

    I truly found this poem to be passionate-a sunny day for you when you wrote this-perhaps-a feeling of there is hope in love and passion-beauty does come from deep within and it can be seen in the eyes-blessings and thanks for sharing- (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (11/17/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    'Beauty are the flowers
    Blessed with faithfulness
    Honesty stains it's plate
    Its kindness fills lakes
    Its love cannot break'...

    nice passage...here the metaphor and the message lie down beautifully embraced...good work...10 (Report) Reply

  • Kutlwano Sonji Nkwe (10/13/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    there is nothing confused than beauty
    to many dying in confusion is now a duty
    it is time to leave them jobless
    this is the best i have to confess (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (7/18/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    very wonderful, my friend..
    I'm amazed by your new ideas...sweet and romantic
    fine-flowing and striking to the heart..
    you're growing more and more poetic and creative
    10+++

    lovelots,
    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Kristina B; Williams (6/11/2009 7:33:00 PM)

    that is beautiful.im actually speechless....and thats unusal 4 me bcuz im all italian...lol i gave it and you a 10.ive read just 2 of your poems in like the past 4 hours, and im a fan.(no not one of the crazy 1s) lol (Report) Reply

  • Lalitha iyer (5/13/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    You are a beauty Eyan..... You are the personification of Beauty.......The beauty of the poem could be added by deepening its make ups and with genuine reflections............................... (Report) Reply

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