Eyan Desir

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.. My Definition Of Beauty - Poem by Eyan Desir

Beauty are the roses
Mixed with beauty within
Not just a pretty face
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Comments about .. My Definition Of Beauty by Eyan Desir

  • DELETED NOW (5/5/2009 7:50:00 AM)

    it kind of sounds generic...
    but I get your drift.
    most people come to an understanding of love...eventually.
    yours sounds more feel than communication.
    I used to be like this too...then someone taught me that feeling are mutual. (Report) Reply

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  • Herbert Nehrlich2 (5/5/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    Good poem with a few spelling errors.

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  • ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/5/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    A TRUE BEAUTY IN THIS POEM..yes the beauty is that one which can bring pleasure for all wo seek the love's treasure..very well and heartfelt write..10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (5/5/2009 6:25:00 AM)

    Endearing write
    you captured true essence
    about what beauty should be
    now I see real beauty! (Report) Reply

  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/5/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    significant........................................... (Report) Reply

  • Naidz Ladia (5/4/2009 6:47:00 PM)

    beauty is found inside and outside...others look the physical appearance regardless of the inner traits..others look also the inner personality not the outside appearance...which is whch, it depends on us..naizz (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (5/4/2009 4:57:00 AM)

    Every true beauty
    yields from inside
    a kind of virtue
    never dies! (Report) Reply

  • Janell Cressman (5/2/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    wow that is good, not many people think that way anymore,
    glad to see there are a few who do! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Mona Martinez (5/2/2009 11:27:00 AM)

    that was wonderful. the true beauty lies inside. i love that part. (Report) Reply

  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (5/1/2009 8:13:00 AM)

    A very insightful and inspiring definition flowing with imagery. To be kind, honest and faithful
    brings inward beauty of the heart which I would call the beautiful rose. 10/10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • rago rago (4/30/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    beauty are the roses.........the last stanza breath taking. A great write for defining beauty. Sincere thanks for your kind sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/30/2009 11:29:00 PM)

    and this is a fine and magnificent definition of beauty..u amazing! (Report) Reply

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