My Doll's Tears Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

My Doll's Tears

Rating: 5.0


The echolalia was sweet
not mechanical not real
inciting to babble
the luxurious sleep
motorized still complacent
rousing for solace
guised to mesmerize
playful but fairy
motivating to appeal
smooth rubberized sheath
covering the fervour
inducing the desire
cries with charm
no emotion no conscience
spouting salty tears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zeinab Sherif 15 July 2009

a very attractive poem with a good idea.

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excellent write..so well has been put and said..

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 July 2009

I can say its a beautiful symbolic poem! with emotions and conscience human being are doll of potters clay! 10+

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covering the fervour inducing the desire cries with charm no emotion no conscience spouting salty tears. ..... it is doll soul less doll which can cay without conscience...lovely composition...10 yes to go and you go alone

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Roland Bastien 21 July 2009

no emotion no conscience spouting salty tears. -------- Like an ocean wave - I like it

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Patrick A. Martin 15 July 2009

Aha but if the doll cries who is to blame me or the doll

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