Amir Foroughi

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My Dying Bride Ii - Poem by Amir Foroughi

Oak of time
Herbs of sorrow
Fables of lost
Vessels of morrow
You stand there alone
Screaming vaguely in the rain
Such awkward spectacle to see
Again giants of terror again pain
Dismantling devotion
In a pathetic condition
Nowhere to come nowhere to go
Whether I want or not
Not
Last tape of confessions
Of lesbians or homos
Foes
Tormented or twisted situation
Survivor of times
See me cry
Far away in a bloody moon
No tolerance for her I want her
To be my dying bride soon
Amen


Comments about My Dying Bride Ii by Amir Foroughi

  • Rookie - 279 Points Zahra Shariat (7/13/2014 5:38:00 AM)

    Mr Froughi , this poem sounds nice and well -written, thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,836 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/14/2012 12:58:00 AM)

    A great poem interestingly written! Admired the quirky intent and literary skill! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashikant Nishant Sharma '? ? ? ? ? ' (5/28/2012 11:50:00 PM)

    good narrative poem...well expressed with a lot of metaphors... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (9/7/2009 7:44:00 AM)

    A very well expressed piece Amir, the narration dips into the readers minds..making you think more clearly about what the poem speaks of...its very well penned....I give a big 10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,209 Points Marieta Maglas (9/6/2009 4:38:00 PM)

    interesting narrative poem, very well written, thank you for sharing..............10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 6, 2009



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