Some Girl

Rookie - 241 Points (May 05)

My Emotions - Poem by Some Girl

I read it the first time
and feel what you feel.
I forget this though
how unreal.

I read it again
to see your mood changed.
I forget though
my emotions are rearranged.

Again I dive in
and open my mind.
To feel your emotions
or are they mine.

The last time I read it
to never look again.
I finally see the words
and now I understand.

It takes me a while
when I read what you wrote.
Yes, it takes several times
and then its up in smoke.

It's now moved on
in a forgotten recess.
Until it's awakened
by loneliness.


Comments about My Emotions by Some Girl

  • Silver Star - 4,114 Points Sekharan Pookkat (10/1/2013 6:42:00 PM)

    better you read
    better you think
    bitter you like
    better you read (Report) Reply

    2 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie Paul R. Wilson (8/24/2013 3:41:00 PM)

    Something we can all relate to. Thank you, Some Girl ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (8/19/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    A nice poem that attracted me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Lucifera Santez (8/19/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    it takes me a while
    when i read what you wrote
    yes, it takes several times
    and then its up in smoke.
    such words full of emotions.
    i loved it.
    please read some of mine.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,573 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/18/2013 6:29:00 PM)

    It's a wonderful poem. Swing of emotions interpret things differently at different times. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 30, 2013


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