My Eyes Tell A Story... Which One Are You Reading Poem by Lil Love Goddess vs. Angel of Death

My Eyes Tell A Story... Which One Are You Reading

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What do you see when you look into my eyes
Do you see a lost soul
Can you see my hearts cries
Do you see death taking control
Do you see joy of long ago bliss
Do you see a beautiful passionate brown
Or are you staring into a deep dark abyss
Can you see that behind every smile is really a frown

What happens when you stare into my eyes
Are you struck with a powerful blow of depression
Do colorful sparks fly across dark skies
Or are you just staring at your own reflextion
Does your eyes fill with tears along with mine
Do you feel the cold of lonliness
Or do you feel the warmth of sunshine
Are you surrounded by momentary bliss

What do you think about when you gaze into my eyes
Do you contemplate saying 'I Love You'
Are you thinkin of more lies
Or, for once, are you thinking of being true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
veronique buea pre 04 August 2010

marvlous words i loved it ;)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 July 2010

‘Do you contemplate saying 'I Love You' Are you thinkin of more lies Or, for once, are you thinking of being true’ ~ Poetry on questionnaires and readers are at liberty to take their own conclusion …it is very popular way of constructing poetry…and you’ve brilliantly done that Yeah I believe why poet will say all answers…let the readers contemplate on…well methinks stare/glance [s/g] swapping if very deep/unalloyed …the very answers come form the s/g…… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Please post poems for us please... n

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Jamie English 24 July 2010

Wow! That is brilliantly written. You are a very talented writer. I can really relate. I get very frustrated and sad when people look at me and they don't realise that I'm crying inside. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Made me smile :)

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