My Fantasy Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

My Fantasy

Rating: 5.0


Asleep I wake, I'm not alone.
I hear a windows, silent breeze.
Deep inside the woods tonight.
I feel long shadows, of that tree.

Each limbs move leaves apart.
Moon shines between the moss.
The kiss of rain drops softly down.
Sleep is so quite that it sits up,
will she come again, while I wait.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'I feel long shadows, of that tree' Rachel Ann Butler

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 04 November 2009

Liked the verse full of observation, imagination and expectation. Nice cute poem.

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Original Unknown Girl 04 November 2009

Beautiful imagery in so few words. HG: -) xx

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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