My Favorite Childish Lanes! Poem by Liza Sud

My Favorite Childish Lanes!

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I wanted to be your dog
And serve you in thankfulness.
A child is a slave of love
If it’s blessed or unblessed.

Such love knows no shame.
My favorite childish lanes!
I want to go there and fall
And cry out of joy non-stop.

On back I lie in the dark.
Clouds are passing up.
Not far away someone goes,
But no one hears my voice.

To disappear I dreamed:
To exist but unseen.
Death will give me this prize –
Unseen in paradise!

Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 02 November 2015

Childhood is an unforgettable and precious chapter in the book of life. The memories of childhood never leave us and come back without any excuses. Wonderfully narrated. Thank you.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 November 2015

Childhood fantasies are often very memorable. So, a trip though childhood lanes must be quite refreshing. Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 02 November 2015

Beautifully penned child's toughs, take you to your childhood unknowingly. Great job Liza! I love this.+X

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