My First Footprints Poem by Nanthinii Mohan

My First Footprints

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I remember the day, when I strolled with you!
You cared for me at my very steps-
Holding my arm in yours;
I kept moving by your side- all along the way.
You wept for me, when my legs pained
More than I and none as you;
I prayed god not to separate us till my demise!
But it was me not you pierced the wall of our love and
Reached the path where you cannot see me;
It seems yesterday, the day I started moving
Till distances apart us!
Yet, you stood there and not me
Still in love, awaiting my return!
Forgetting that it was you let me to walk first!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(Dedicated To My Beloved Father)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 March 2019

You wept for me, when my legs pained More than I and none as you; still in love awaiting your return... expectations so well portrayed. thank u. tony

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Neela Nath Das 05 April 2012

It made me remember the fond memories of my dead father.Good Write!

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Valerie Dohren 11 March 2012

This is a really beautiful poem, loved the read.

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Allemagne Roßmann 04 September 2011

great thinking...well done

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 September 2011

your love poems are really beautiful.keep inking.liked it.

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