My Forgetfulness Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

My Forgetfulness

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Some flowery speech
Comatose
Was not unlike
Music from reed
On the winds flying
Spontaneous

You want it back
Deframed
Original
Shall I go to the same state
Of unconsciousness

Conversations have the ambient
Warmth of love
I love you
Because it matters not
In the form

I will recall the moment
I have to have my eyes one with you
If you forgive me
For my forgetfulness

Islamabad
25/3/2010

Thursday, March 25, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

…’I love you/Because it matters not/In the form…’ here you Sir succeeded to deploy emotion …indeed Love is a Form from every from Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rehana Nazli 06 April 2010

Spontaneity is great creative skill. The momnet gone can be recreated but it can never be the same. I like this poem's theme.

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A reed's flowery speach.to so far it does reach..in a moment of a forgiveness for forgetfullness of a pain and a love born breech... a healer was that flowery speach... beautiful...so warm and touching vesres...

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Lady Grace 25 March 2010

i like the theme..forgetfulness, sometimes it comes..nicely done..

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