My Friend-My Better Half. Poem by seemakhera (Aanamika 805)

My Friend-My Better Half.

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A friend, who has taught me,
how beautiful the life is.

A friend, who shares my feeling, my pain &
helps me to come out of it.

A friend, who always tells me,
give what ever your lovedones expect from you.

A friend, who is so generous,
A friend, who is loyal in his words.

A friend, who is so caring and loving
A friend, with whom i find my self safe and secure

A friend, who always tries to change my life for- betterment.
A friend, who hold s my hand,
when the clouds of loneliness, surrounds me.

Afriend, who has taught me, to learn from my mistakes.
A friend, who has shownme, right path of life.

A friend, whois always there beside me,
where there is a dream to share-
a sweet surprise or a special joy.

Afriend, who takes me for long drive.
A friend, who has given, half of his world.

A friend, who is Ravishing
A friend, who isAdorable
A friend, who isValiant
A friend, who Intelligible, solves my problems
A friend, whom I,
Strongly honour, admire his rich, magnificiant attitude.

A friend, who takes care of me
Afriend, every women or girl, want to have.

A friend, whom I LOVE very much.
This is what my friend Is--.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 15 December 2008

A good friend is like an anchor on a ship

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It is an awesome piece...Speaks so much of my heart..yet it speaks nothing of what i've got in my heart. Your writing skill is so good but your heart is better than that. Keep writing, and thanks a lot for sharing this one. :)

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

WOW! ! ! A very nice poem to your better-half..truely the better half is also a soulmate who is also rounded to be the friend, best friend etc......10+++

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Ted M 11 July 2009

You have highlighted and described everything about ' The Friend' and his name too. Well written.

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Shyam Balaji 29 December 2008

ur friend must read this! ! ! .....wonderful descriptions...nd good way of puting it up as a poem...ur frenz re lucky for u love them so much! ! >....like to read more from u! ! ! ....good luck! ! ..bye...tc.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 December 2008

Yes, annamika, I want to be your friend, your truly friend.Nice piece my friend!

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