My Girl, My Woman, My Lover Poem by Noel Horlanda

My Girl, My Woman, My Lover

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I could see her bright eyes,
dark brown irises blends
with her crown flowing through
behind her naked back

Deep dimples when she smiles,
marks her face, gay as bright as day,
teeth as white as ivory keys
brings odd music to my head

The choice of my heart,
right at that moment I saw her,
can’t understand why so drastic,
and I wonder could this be love?

Yes I believe so, dying to meet her,
she’s my girl, my woman but
not yet as lover, only as friend,
soon she would be part of me

There was a day under a bright summer sun,
surprised to see her embraces me hard,
yellow ribbon on her beige hair,
soft as gentle breeze turns me on

Astonished of what she did,
she knew by the looks of my eyes,
love is just next door, am the boy,
you’re my girl, my woman and my lover

Ay, am yours forever but look up,
dark clouds hovered over suddenly,
unexpectedly flashes of light, thunder,
and water drains out blood, frail, scarlet

And when I looked at her again,
my girl, my woman and my lover yet
dampness made her slips away,
too late the ecstasy totally gone now

Whimper not, voices in the wind whispers,
for she’s there somewhere, nearby,
I know one day she' d be back,
my girl, my woman and my lover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Gosh finish…and a very nice poetic twist Imageries are sparkling…enjoyed… Masterly penned… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Meggie Gultiano 06 August 2009

Beautiful flow of words..so well crafted. A great piece.

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Lady Grace 16 June 2009

beautiful..nice composition..your lover, your woman, your girl and your friend..all in one person..grace

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Eddie Roa 01 March 2009

Youthful love and it's sad loss. Have faith that if she really is yours she will be back. nicely written, but be mindful of some grammar miscues.

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Noel Horlanda

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Bohol, Philippines
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