My Happy Poem ^.^ Poem by Kaila George

My Happy Poem ^.^



Fluffy bunnies how sweet is that

Hoppity hop in sweet candy land

Butterflies dancing in the breeze

Bluejays singing as happy as can be

Oh my gosh ders dat nasty man

Hunting wabbits oh let me be

Then out of no where..pop...boom...bang

An anvil and hammer bops nasty bad man

Sniffing and eating....the grass merrily

I watch carefully at dat nasty bad man

Looks likes he is out for the rest of the day

As I hop on merrily on my way to play

In our fairy wonderful candy land

Friday, January 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: happy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this after my son was born...actually never got around to posting it till now.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 09 January 2015

If I didn't know anybody I'd say elmer fud came along your house and said shoo, Im hunting wabit', this was funny and sweet, why anybody hunts rabbits I don't know, there's not much meat, although I have never tasted rabbit stew. Although I hear they do an interesting pastime that involves a lot of lovers hopscotch. The closings nice and very bittersweet, given how the world is, I wouldn't mind going to candyland

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