My Hart Is Happy Poem by danyelle tedrow

My Hart Is Happy



the felling i get wene i see your face
oh the joy it brings me
oh how i long for you how long iv waited in the dark hopen one day
a love would left me up and make me whole thank you my darling i will
all ways be great full you came in my life

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i like it just the way it is

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Adeline Foster 28 July 2011

Honey you need not fade away. Just get your self a word book and learn to spell. You do have promise as a poet, yet your spelling need improvement. This poem can look like this: - the feeling I get when I see your face oh the joy it brings me oh how I long for you how long I’ve waited in the dark hoping one day a love would lift me up and make me whole thank you my darling I will always be grateful you came into my life Adeline

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