My Heart Poem by Hira Akhtar

My Heart

Rating: 5.0


'He took my heart,
In the ocean of love and care
Gave it a pleasant bath
Adorned it with lovely everlasting flare
Then to me, returned it back

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
HEE HEE its not at all based on reality, I was just sitting and some rhymes came into my mind and I wrote this short poem... :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 26 May 2014

You have unconsciously wrote that Almighty Allah has cleaned your heart because He liked your heart as His seat. a nice poem.

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Ramesh Rai 12 November 2013

a lovely emotional write. keep writing. will get the destination.

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Abhishek Mishra 03 October 2013

Beautiful and so sweet..keep writing such awesome poems: -)

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