My Heart Breaks But I’m You’re Man Poem by Uriah Hamilton

My Heart Breaks But I’m You’re Man

Rating: 5.0


I’ll kiss you
In another reality
Where the stars croon
Like a 1920’s singer.

Fantasy dances
In my eyes tonight,
Roses form wedding rings
And everywhere
There is a chapel
With open doors….

You know I love you,
Every myth is true,
There will never be
Greater lovers
Wandering these rainy streets again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shannon Chapel 21 March 2006

As always, this is beautiful. You have a gift, Uriah, and I am so glad that you choose to share it with the rest of us. Much love and respect, my friend. Shannon xoxo

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Joy Vanderhelm 21 March 2006

Very sweet and beautiful. Typical write from you, Uriah. Keep it coming.

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... ... 26 March 2006

a wonderful poem

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Sandra Fowler 22 March 2006

This is vintage Uriah Hamilton. What more needs to be said? Warm regards, Sandra

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Charles Chaim Wax 21 March 2006

the astounding honesty rips into the heart just goes into it the truth of true love nothing like it and to gather words into a poem and then give that poem freely to all that deserves the highest praise

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Mary Nagy 21 March 2006

I agree with Ivy.........the sadness bleeds through yet it's such a beautiful poem! The romance and passion that is in your heart is so wonderful. You are just about as beautiful as a person I've ever known Uriah. You should know that (and believe that!) Sincerely, Mary

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Ivy Christou 21 March 2006

beautiful images in this romantic poem my friend, but I sense sadness behind the lines since from the title and the use of both fantasy and 'another reality' implies a desire for spending more time with her in real life than in dreams. Don't let your heart break Uriah, it is far too precious! excellent write! HBH

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