Neela Nath


My Heart Is Torn - Poem by Neela Nath

My heart is torn in pieces,
Gather them if you can.
For they are very precious,
Covetous to anyone!
Lust has lost its path here,
Innocence is no pride,
But you trod on it and,
Take a smooth, fast stride!
They bear a touch of Heaven,
They keep my love sublime;
Stoop and pick them up in hands,
Let Heart, beat in rhyme! !


Comments about My Heart Is Torn by Neela Nath

  • Gold Star - 14,135 Points * Sunprincess * (9/10/2012 10:11:00 PM)

    great imagery...an excellent write.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (6/24/2012 10:36:00 AM)

    This is highly emotional. I think this is a deep personal experience, Great work also (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Hazel Connelly (4/17/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    I like this it flows, very poetic. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,160 Points Pheko Motaung (3/10/2012 12:05:00 PM)

    This is your masterpiece this is your classic this is you in your element at your poetic most imaginative! You my sincere wonderful magnificent friend...you rock you make the world a better place to call home! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 23, 2012



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