My Hope Poem by Rekha Mandagere

My Hope

Rating: 4.0


Take me away from the world of ignorance,
Lead me to the path of essence.
Drive away all my past memories
Fill my heart with your everlasting glories.

Moon is the symbol of purity
Make my soul shine with your clarity
Wash away the sins if you have seen any.
I hope, I haven't done many.

Never say that others are correct
But your mother is always perfect!
She has struggled and struggled to stand erect
My hope, you stand by me to project.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Narayanan Ramakrishnan 07 February 2011

beautiful and nicely written.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 08 February 2011

a well written sinsere poem. marks 10.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 10 February 2011

Mothers heart when cry loudly for her child to protect from all the worries of the time, perhaps, it forms a poem. Stand straight by the side of the son, one day your laugh will be illuminated on the faces of thousands who are in very need of a mother. Thank you. Write more.....LIVE LONG...... Regards, pranab 10

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Wendy Thopliss 15 February 2011

lovely heartfelt words, nice poem.

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Marcus Mckinley 15 February 2011

Indeed in a clear night the moon will guide your hopes and dreams. nicely done

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 June 2011

there is lot of love and emotion in the lines.nice flow and rhyme.liked it.

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Unwritten Soul 20 March 2011

Rahul must be lucky to have a spirit of yellow flag blown by your hopes, like a moonlight he will always bold in dark night as a knight pride..Hope your hope is more than hope so future he can cope with truly road

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Bernard Snyder 07 March 2011

'Take me away from the world of ignorance'. What a line! Another lovely poem. This one seems was written with somewhat of an attitude or edge. I love it! I gave a 10' as well!

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David Beckham 03 March 2011

I echo what Sally has said and will add 'Great emotions'. Flow is so smooth and easy to read. enjoyed it. tfs 10\10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 February 2011

Great sentiment.

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