Lucia Domingos Fula

Rookie (10 july 1994 / London Middlesex hospital)

My Identity - Poem by Lucia Domingos Fula

Look at me,

Tell me what you see
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Comments about My Identity by Lucia Domingos Fula

  • Rookie - 10 Points J.b. Lebuert (2/19/2012 6:46:00 PM)

    Hi Luzia
    This is also a nice poem - the last line should be revised to spell myself correctly. The message is that you're searching for yourself, but that will change with time, and the gathering of knowledge. Life is a journey and some of my thoughts are contained in my poem The Journey. I hope your journey is a pleasant one, although the harder times tend to deveolp character in us. Be good to yourself and treat yourself kindly. Make good choices in life and take responsibility for your actions. I wish you luck on your journey through life! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Prasetya Utama (4/20/2011 2:51:00 AM)

    I think it is great poem, search your identity...who am I? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rinki Nandy (2/7/2011 12:26:00 PM)

    A lot of people are with you, who are looking for their identity and even when it is found they are confused about it. Your thought process is productive, this way is a nice medium. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Santosh Sharma (2/7/2011 6:26:00 AM)

    This is irony of human nature, at times one can not say what one's want where he or she wishes to go. Wonderful reveleation of human complex nature. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (2/2/2011 9:11:00 AM)

    Revelation about yourself with complexity of hidden character. Well written and sincerity was display in each lines.
    Keep it up... and hope to read more from you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 233 Points Mohammad Muzzammil (2/2/2011 7:31:00 AM)

    Yeah. You spoke truth that it is a complex quest to indentify oneself. But i'm sure you are a good poetess whose poems are nice like her. (Report) Reply

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