Premila Patel


****My Imagination of a Purple Sky****


I imagined a Purple Sky today from dawn till dusk.
A gold moon and millions of gold stars lit across this silk sheet of a Purple Sky.
And then it rained streaks of fine gold.
........................
........................
read full text »


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Comments about this poem (****My Imagination of a Purple Sky**** by Premila Patel )

  • Rookie Ted M (8/7/2009 9:19:00 PM)

    This is an amazing fairy tale. Something in the league of Cinderella and the glass slipper. Nicely constructed dream....... May your dream come true. Best wishes 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/30/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    Amazing imagination, nicely penned.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/6/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    the flow of vocab/ thoughts tally with each other/ boost up the theme/decor/ lovely and meaningful (Report) Reply

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  6. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  7. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  8. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  9. If, Rudyard Kipling
  10. Warning, Jenny Joseph
[Hata Bildir]