Premila Patel


****my Imagination Of A Purple Sky**** - Poem by Premila Patel

I imagined a Purple Sky today from dawn till dusk.
A gold moon and millions of gold stars lit across this silk sheet of a Purple Sky.
And then it rained streaks of fine gold.
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Comments about ****my Imagination Of A Purple Sky**** by Premila Patel

  • Rookie Ted M (8/7/2009 9:19:00 PM)

    This is an amazing fairy tale. Something in the league of Cinderella and the glass slipper. Nicely constructed dream....... May your dream come true. Best wishes 10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/30/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    Amazing imagination, nicely penned.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/6/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    the flow of vocab/ thoughts tally with each other/ boost up the theme/decor/ lovely and meaningful (Report) Reply








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