My Immortality In Love Poem by Amitava Sur

My Immortality In Love

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I can see them all to love their mates
Being alive and so long they live on this earth.
But I will love you dear even after my death
Disagreeing with those hindrances
Being laid down by the paws of mortality.

The moment I fell in love with you
A fact revealed to me,
This life's little span is so limited for me
To be hardly be satisfied with the enormous urge of love,
What I dream and beseech from you.

But I'll not keep me hungry for your love
And horrific death even cannot stop that hunger.
I'll go on loving you in coming lives
Even after my death.

I'll not keep myself hungry anymore
But will go on loving you.
In lives after lives will keep on loving
Endlessly up to eternity and beyond.
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Amitava (22.6.2016)

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My Immortality In  Love
Wednesday, June 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful poem about the immortality of love and a beautiful image to go with it.

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Roseann Shawiak 30 June 2016

Amitava, your poem speaks volumes of love for Rakhee, it is intensely beautiful and inspiring, many women wish they could have even a particle of love from a man like you have for Rakhee! ! Explaining how you will continue loving her even though death has come between you now, filling the emptiness of your own future death with love that you will give her through as many lifetimes as it takes to be reunited! What a beautiful love and wonderful man you truly are! Your words spark fantastic dreams of love in everyone who reads this poem! Totally awesome and joyful thoughts within every line! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Thank you for sharing this poem, Amitava, totally love it! RoseAnn

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