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GOODENOUGH SAKHILE(SHOTAROMEO) DLAMINI (08 DECEMBER 1992 / KWAZULU NATAL, PINETOWN)
MY LIFE IN ACTION
It's a vision or it an illusion?
No it must be a vision but I need a transformation
Of a sections in a vision.
Illusion become a section of planation
As I am an illusionist of my life
My life in action
Look at me; I will take an emotional acceleration
Towards an action
I blame nobody for accusation that is life
Which is essential of expectations?
My visions will take me through the action
So I need a mission to see my vision come true
My visions need directions but my directions
Will be just an omission without a decision
One day they will look at me also my
Visions and life become successfully
There will say it's an occasion
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a brave attempt indeed...never give up!
Other than the spelling bro, the most important thing is to be able read between the lines, the most significant thing is to be able to comprehend the theme, and by my side, all that was truely satisfied, the invinvible attitude derived from your proud emotions, will play a large amount towards, its nice theme bro. Well expressed reagardless of the grammar, we all have a room for improvement afterall....Write More mate,
The_African_Son
....What's with all the spelling and grammatical errors...?
There are some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors...not sure if you included them intentionally to express something? but over all a nice poem especially for someone in your position, first year uni. Keep the ambition and enthusiasm!