Udiah (witness to Yah)

Rookie - 36 Points (1959 / USA)

My Little Garden Helper - Poem by Udiah (witness to Yah)

You were just a little girl
With sparkling eyes and hair a curl
As if it were just yesterday
You’d brightened my life in many a way

I did not recognize you standing there
A young woman who looked so fair
I had to ask one just who you were
And they replied, “that’s Al over there”

I used to call you ‘Alley Cat’
To tease you for this and that
But now that you are all grown up
I haven’t a clue as to how I address you
So I guess Alison will have to do

A beautiful lady The Good Lord has made
May His kindness in you never ever fade

Your Uncle

Comments about My Little Garden Helper by Udiah (witness to Yah)

  • Gold Star - 5,433 Points Patricia Grantham (8/13/2013 11:07:00 AM)

    She was a beautiful flower in your garden with her curly hair.
    Lots of love exemplified in this lovely and short write. Yes God
    did make all things beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (7/30/2013 9:39:00 PM)

    a nice sonnet. enjoyed the read. filled with emotions (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,799 Points David Wood (7/23/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    A lovely sonnet of love. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,085 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/22/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    Beautiful expression of love and affection and deep sentiments. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 13, 2013

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