My Little Wish Poem by alize raymond

My Little Wish



As i wish upon a shooting star i find my self with my head lowerd like i was sad or mad at the world an as i made my wish to be happy an explore my head grow lower and lower till i was crying on the floor no one could cheer me or make me crack a smile till the phone ring and an it was the man i waited for when i knew it was him i ansowered with a (what took so long) he said im sorry an we made up and went down hill wonce again

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Alma Campa 03 May 2008

i like how it explains the cycles of some realtionships :) ive been there before...so do you writyhe your poems on inspiration coming from your own life? i do it but only sometimes beacsue if something happens i migh regret wrtiting a poem and that would be the worst

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 April 2008

nice written...pleasure to read.........

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Will P. Litter 11 April 2008

:) sounds romantic, yet so simple too. Nice!

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