My Love Poem by Kelly Zender

My Love

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You have that eye for detail and usually forget the overall issue.
You know I’d never tie you down.
An individual separable part of something,
needing several items of information,
parts that together make up a whole.
Two people,
a specific task?
Facts about you,
items and events.
Decorate Love,
be very specific and include all of the particulars
covering every item.
Fail, unable to remember you.
Left you behind accidentally,
failed to give you due attention.
Stop, thinking and worrying of you.
Failed to mention,
you lost control
Somethings are not really very important
not worth worrying about.
You asked of me?
You’re the subject of concern.
Most important topic and discussion.
Dispute between two?
Find new things,
officially supplied,
officially denied.
Conflict and emotional distress.
Conclusion of the matter?
Under discussion,
one extremity to the other,
including everything
considered as a whole.
Were you disappointed with the results,
taking everything into account
Forgetting almost every waking day!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 November 2008

It's all about mutual understanding............makes up the ' two as one'.Nice writes Kelly.

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Billy Joe Collins 10 November 2008

well wrote thanks for sharing

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