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Kuji soliman

(1997 / cairo/egypt)

*MY LOVE*


my love left me so sad...
now i feel very bad...
i have such a good life, i should be glad...
but somehow, i am verry mad...


my love...are you here?
if you are not, are you near?
at least to see your smile so mire...
that makes all the darkness disapear...


i want to see you...
to see you smile...
i want to sit with you...
and talk for a while...


my love, i love you so...
pls stay with me, dont go...

nomatter what you do...
i will always love you...

my love...
you are above,
everything i've been dreaming of...

Submitted: Friday, February 20, 2009
Edited: Monday, July 06, 2009

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  • Merna Ibrahim (10/11/2009 6:43:00 PM)

    Great poem really it deserves a great appreciation...and the rhyme is Excellent! !
    10...Merna (Report) Reply

  • DaNa XxX (9/26/2009 8:56:00 PM)

    thats such a well dont written..in the age of 12 you should be proud that you write like this..
    DaNa... (Report) Reply

  • DaNa XxX (9/26/2009 8:52:00 PM)

    thats such a well dont written..in the age of 12 you should be proud that you write like this..
    DaNa... (Report) Reply

  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/21/2009 2:59:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem of love from the young to the old ( 74 years old) . You know the real meaning of love-the only way it can be narrated so truthfully the way you did in 'My Love'.You are an inspiring young writer. You write about the things we poets dream of and aspire for all humanity.My this is another 10...keep up your writing, you're good and can only get better! (Report) Reply

  • Zeinab Sherif (8/11/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    a romantic poem A1 i loved it so much.u r wonderful & u taught me with this poem that love doesn't have an age (Report) Reply

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