~*~my Love~*~ Poem by Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

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~*~my Love~*~

Rating: 5.0


I plunge into the warm waters of passion,
to war with the waves of emotion.
For I'm weak I had seek Perfection of
Truest love,
I've been out-casted upon outcrop of rocks
(OVER AND OVER)
drag across roughhewn rocks of absolute
body beat and battered and bleeding
for my only purpose is of my princess.
My heart speaks to my LOVE every night
as I sleep,
and in that sweet reunion my soul will not
release
ME from torment of not having her, at any cost.
For her beauty speak to me as the sounds of
ten thousand harps.
My soul scream unto the dark of night
'nigh I linger a love sick fool, please release
me from this torment, embrace me or release
me from this inferno Hell '
For I pay the price for SHE isn't in my arms,
the sea has judge me and found me,
Wanting and incomplete
(WITHOUT HER LOVE)
Even in death I will not leave her side,
The heavens will have to wait
for I will not fly without MY LOVE~*~

MY HAND IS STILL WARM,
MY SWEET ANGEL

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 21 May 2009

The power of love'e confessional is here portayed with much pathos Randy - - and it is filled with warm and tender feeling - - a 10 and more for your honesty in verse..... from Fay....10 + ++

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Lady Grace 02 June 2009

a true love can always be a sweet even if it ends in tragedy..i like your poem..grace

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Reshma Ramesh 31 May 2009

wow.............randy passionate and filled with love...............lucky is ur angel.....

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Anjali Sinha 29 May 2009

a bitter sweet tragedy wowwwwww MY HAND IS STILL WARM, MY SWEET ANGEL lovely words a tenner from me anjali

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Bitter sweet Randy. But also strong, powerful, vivid, determined piece with imagery to die for! 'dragged across roughhewn rocks battered and bleeding' 'her beauty speaks to me as the sounds of 10,000 harps'. You are a suitor who will never take NO for an answer! excellent! 10 Karin Anderson

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Naidz Ladia 22 May 2009

this is a kind of a very strong but sweet piece..i could not gauge this in a poetic manner coz i don't consider myself as poet..but for me, this is a very nice one considering the situation as the views of sadness..'live and don't let it die..love, and you shall live''..naizz

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