My Love Poem by wabi sabi

My Love

Rating: 5.0


whenever it is
no matter how hard I try to ignore
I find you

on the surface of the river
on the green of the mountains
among the many stars in the sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guess Who 11 June 2012

As simple and meaningful i like it nicely written Guess Who

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Unwritten Soul 11 June 2012

Beautiful with new style, and it really a beautiful one...nice write again and the way you end the poem is cool_Unwritten Soul

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Vipins Puthooran 14 June 2012

Really beautiful to feel! ! ! !

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Kasia Fedyk 17 June 2012

Exquisite poem Wabi! love sweet love. Thank you! Love and Light

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Subodh Pandey 21 June 2012

a beautiful write dear

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Akhtar Jawad 04 October 2017

Nature is reflected everywhere and cannot be ignored. A beautiful impressive poem.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 November 2016

Heart felt write to inspire, when love is unified within,

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 May 2016

on the surface of the river on the green of the mountains among the many stars in the sky.....ignoring does nt help. you are in me and i see u everywhere.... very nice and romantic. love this poem. short and sweet. tony

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 March 2016

The last three lines are so very Romantic...indeed, we cannot escape love we feel in our hearts.

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Walija Amir 03 July 2012

Simple by heart touching..

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