My Love Poem by Dee Maguire

My Love

Rating: 4.0


When we met I knew you were the one,
I knew it had to be,
You held me tight and kissed my lips
I wanted you just for me.

I wanted you to want me,
Forever and a day,
I knew from the second I met you
I had to have my way.

Still this day I love you
We’ve had our ups and downs
But still this day I need you
My true love I have found.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laura Cummings 02 November 2005

Both poems are good although the beginning of this one is verry similar to a part in the other 'You held me tight and kissed my lips'. But your work is good keep writting and i'll keep reading: -)

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