My Love Is Like.......... Poem by Lora Colon

My Love Is Like..........

Rating: 5.0


My love is like a burning fire,
My love is an unchanging flame
That will keep you warm and satisfied,
And will always remain the same

My love is like a waterfall,
Spilling over the walls of my heart,
Flowing like an elixir of joy,
Forever yours..... right from the start

My love is like a forest of dreams,
With trees of incredible height,
Towering over you with tenderness,
Branches braided with darkness and light

My love is like a holy temple
Where God has placed His throne;
Before Him I kneel to pledge my love
To you, my darling, you alone

My love is like a beam of light,
Across galaxies it could stream;
Close your eyes and imagine its glow.....
Now open them - it's not a dream!

My love is all truth, there are no lies,
In this declaration rests the glory;
Take my love, let your soul rejoice,
Or.... let earth hear its saddest story!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Brown 25 November 2013

Nice poem Lora. Sounds like someone is well loved.

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Khairul Ahsan 17 January 2014

It's a beautiful love poem.10/10. 'My love is like a holy temple Where God has placed His throne; Before Him I kneel to pledge my love To you, my darling, you alone' - This stanza is a real gem!

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Joseph Anderson 30 November 2013

How do I love thee, let me count the ways. A real beauty here, full of sweetness and love-10

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Valerie Dohren 28 November 2013

A sweet love poem, well penned Lora.

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Charles Darnell 27 November 2013

A dramatic love poem with interesting half-rhyme scheme.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 27 November 2013

Your poems Lora glow with the strength and sweetness of love.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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