My Love Left On A Night Poem by volence patel

My Love Left On A Night

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My belt loosens slowly.
Reminders of you stay fresh
in murky ponds of suffocating tadpoles.
Wake me in the morning,
when the sun shines again.
It's frightening when all I know
falls apart.
And all I know is you.
Hunger squeezes me tighter.
My soul sags with exhaustion.
Ashtrays fill with sleepless nights.
Weeping intensifies my anxiety.
Can tomorrow come without you...
here today?
The cheap chandelier falls on my face.
The rose filled lamp explodes in my hands.
Pain is unrecognizable.
All I knew was you.
You.
My love.

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Commendable work...Mellifluous structuring...Intriguing storyline...Vivid imagework. Solid sll-around craftsmanship. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Commendable work...Mellifluous structuring...Intriguing storyline...Vivid imagework. Solid sll-around craftsmanship. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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