My Lovely World. Poem by Fay Slimm

My Lovely World.

Rating: 4.9


As unworldly and unwise as it seems,
I walk in dreams.

Unable to influence changes around
I am astounded
At what appears unseemly ecstacy
Engendered in me
By simply walking in spheres of the heart.

Love is imparted,
Which, in colouring each breath I now take
Leads me to making
Every exciting moment pleasantly
Good - dreaming presents
An acceptable world, and love survives
Then, most surprisingly.

Gives wonderful days, if, in replacing
Reality I pace
Myself with beautiful fantasy, where soul
Wraps love around soul.

Thus life becomes wholly fine and worthwhile.
My heart can then smile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Maria 06 January 2009

This is wonderful & not dreaming. The reality of inner peace & joy & simple love of life echoes in your poetry & brings back what we all call out for. Thank you Fay : -)

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Fiona Davidson 06 January 2009

Simply beautiful heartfelt poetry Fay...thank you for sharing it....Fi

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Viola Grey 12 January 2009

the world you live in beats with a pure heart..and that is real...what a fantastic way to be...nice write Fay

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Ron Flowers 07 January 2009

I love the positive message this poem sends. A 10.

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Alison Cassidy 07 January 2009

You're right. Sometimes one can become so disenchanted by the horror of the real world that our buoyancy and optimism can leave us. Your delightful poem shows that the one place (the only place) we CAN change is the place inside us and, in reality, that's the only place that matters. So dream your dreams, Fay and live your life in 'unseemly ecstasy' (lovely expression) . Well worth the read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Kris Smith 06 January 2009

This is a beautiful write from a pure heart thankyou for giving us hope of what we can achieve, your good friend Chris 10 ++++

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David Taylor 06 January 2009

Beautiful, thank you for sharing your dreams Fay, David.

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